The following lines might depict the emotional wave that is emanated from my mind. Readers can interpret these lines in their own ways. Please give your interpretations on the following lines.
Complexity of Life
I'm so confused, wanna run, wanna hide
I'm scared to take, filled with so much pride
Cant say in words, even hard to show
Wanna drift away, but find it hard to let go
Love or lust, I dont even know
That urge and temptation to just go with the flow
Hard to show feelings, emotion and all
Not sure to open up,cautious I might fall
Tired of all the drama, pain and being abused
Tired of suffering and not knowing whos being used
So far so good, in fear that it might go wrong
I dont actually know how it lasted this long
I just hope this feeling will lead to something more
Something right and true, something to live for.
-Chronicwriter
This poem is crazy cool .. so sensuous so moving.. it just gets to you even if you have no idea what its about~~~
ReplyDeleteTat was awesome...
I don think tis is ur first poem..
and am honored tat i made u write one!
Thanx dude! :-)
@naveen
ReplyDeletemachi.. not my first ofcourse.. if i had not got that link from you this mornng, this post wud not have come.. welkum machoo
It's a good poem-and to be honest, I usually don't like reading poetry much.
ReplyDeletegood job...simple words... they simply tell the emotions behind a deeply disturbed mind.
ReplyDeleteFor me, it talks about a person standing in the crossroads of her life... her past influencing her future, not able to let go and not able to hold on..
@silver..
ReplyDeleteyou are here after 6 months.. great..
@destiny
ReplyDeleteyou are almost evry close to the emotions with wich i drafted this post
if dats ur first attempt thn i must say...great job!!
ReplyDelete@gunj
ReplyDeletenot my first attempt. thank you anyways...:-)
Hard to show feelings, emotion and all
ReplyDeleteNot sure to open up,cautious I might fall
tats so me... n ur nephew is very cute!!!
hahaha
ReplyDelete@bubbles
which foto?
the black and white snap? thats me...
the colour pix is my nephew.. and yeah! he is cute
super interpretations. nothing more to add! =)
ReplyDelete@gaya3
ReplyDeletenandree
Awesome post....:)
ReplyDeleteperfect rhyming and soulful lines :)
ReplyDeleteLet me also try...
FOR FIRST LOVE :) CHEERS Chriz!
let me count to ten
Go hide inside the pen.
I tried to find you but then
you hid so nicely, "I WON".
What is it you are holding?
So tight that it is folding.
What is it you are saving?
waiting for me to come braving?
Don't look at me that way
my heart melts at your sway.
I melt and yearn for a bite
Oh! the green apple you hold so tight.
Could spot you in the crowd,
watching me fall hands bowed,
my eyes glued at you
not at the road below you.
Is it wrong to cry?
Is it wrong to hide?
The ground below me poked
When my thread to sanity broke.
YOU and ME on a bright sunny day
trees and breeze waved with gay
YOU and ME and the beautiful meadow
still brings a smile wide and mellow.
Let me tell you how I feel
my heart is beating like a fool
Allow me get you the brightest gem
wrap it a packet for thee my lovely fem.