Aug 19, 2009

355. Renu {My cutie-pie}

Pre-note: My first love Renu is still in my heart. This post has the details of how my first love bloomed. I thank my first cousin "Cherubina" for taking pains in giving cartoon shape to the characters involved in this True story. Also this is the first time, I have written a song that talks about my love life. I have composed a simple tune [G-C-D progression] for the song. I have added the song video at the end of this post. This is also the first time in my life, I am attempting to play the harmonica and guitar simultaneously. Read the story before viewing the video, so that you will understand the song better. The story is about three people; Shabir, Renu and Chriz.

My First day in School

It was a raining that morning. Summer was just over and the rains had just invaded South India. My mom said, it was June 3rd 1985. I don't know whether that was the exact date, but i remember the incidents that happened on that day. I was a young kid then. I was just three years old. My dad told me that I would be joining school that day. I never had a single clue what a school would look like. But finally when my parents took me to school, i got my first visual taste of school.

[Click the picture to see an enlarged view of the same]

There were lot of parents who had brought their children to school. All the kids looked around with confusion circling their small brains. Soon they took me inside a room. I saw many kids inside the room. All were crying and throwing a fit. Suddenly my parents left the scene too. Tears started welling my eye-lids and just when I was about to cry, I saw her...

She was the most beautiful girl I had ever seen in my life so far (as on 1985). She wore a pink frock. She had the most beautiful lips. She smiled at me and that was the mistake she committed. That single smile is making me type this post today. She is Renu. She is the Heroine of this post. I stopped crying (Gentlemen are not supposed to cry in front of a lady). I looked around and saw all the other kids crying out loud. But there was one guy who was standing on top of the bench. He was not crying, he was kicking the other kids. He is Shabir and he is the Villain of this post. Suddenly he stopped kicking the other kids and his focus shifted to Renu. I realised that he had fallen in love with her too. I knew that I would have competition through out my school life. If Renu was the Heroine and if Shabir was the Villain, Am I the Hero? The answer is No. This is the twist in the script. I am the Anti-comedian of this story. I am presenting to all my readers, the bio-data of Shabir, Renu and Me (as on 1985)

Shabir

Name : Shabir Iqbal Ahmed
Sex : Male
Date of Birth : December 21 1981
Hobbies : Kicking grandpa, Biting my sister
Achievements : I can spell A N T A R T I C A
Strengths : I can go to the toilet alone at night time. I do not fear darkness
Favorite SuperHero : He-man. I am the master of the universe

Renu

Name : Renu
Sex : Girl
Date of Birth : April 13 1982
Hobbies : Applying my mommy's lipstick on my lips, Wearing fashionable frocks
Achievements : I know three rhymes
Strengths : My smile
Favorite SuperHero : Barbie Doll.

Chriz

Name : Prason Christopher Robin
Sex : It is a bad word
Date of Birth : Same as Renu's birthday
Hobbies : Eating candle sticks, running around the house naked
Achievements : Wetting my bed every night
Strengths : I can climb the big window in my bedroom
Favorite SuperHero : Super-man. I love his red underwear.

Back to the story

Soon a lady entered the class room and said, "Good Morning Children". She then made us to say "Good morning Ma'm". In the coming days, she taught us many rhymes. I liked her. Her name is Saro. She was a lovely lady. She took wonderful care of me. I wanted to tell her that I was in love with Renu. But I was a gentleman even at such an young age and I knew how to keep a secret.

In the coming days, i did everything to win Renu's heart. I even tried committing suicide once by doing this [link]. The knife broke into pieces.But still I could not win her heart. Once I even saved her from a big fire accident.

Saving Renu from a fire accident

One day I was sitting next to Renu.Her lips were like those sugar coated strawberries( Now! Don't u go into a dreamworld! she is mine!!ok ok.. she WAS mine.. at least in my dreams).She was taller than me though. But does size matter? Her hair was as soft like the brush we used to clean our toilet. ( Am i describing her in a obscene manner? Glad that we did not have any sexual harassment policies in kindergarden)

Shabir was the hero of the class because he was the only one who can chew a chewing gum without swallowing it. The girls were amazed at his wonderful chewing gum-chewing abilities. He used to defeat me round and square in academics also. My vocabulary was so limited then. According to me "A was for Apple". But Shabir used to confuse everyone saying that A was for air-plane,Anaconda,Acracadabra and so on.

When we were using chalk pieces and black slate boards for writing , he was the first one to use a note book and a pencil. To cope up with the ever increasing competition, i brought my first note book and pencil to school. I never knew how to hold a pencil. But who cares , cos now i had half the class's attention. Shabir could not take it any longer. He grabbed my pencil and broke it into two pieces. Such actions were considered to be an act of bravery. Renu fell in instant love with him. Now i wanted to show that i was one step ahead of him in the race. I started screaming at the top of my voice. My class teacher ( on whom i developed an affection at a later point of time) rushed to the scene and instead of punishing him , started thrashing my bum ( cos possession of pencil in kindergarden was treated as a crime under the POTA kindergarden Act).

Renu started avoiding me.That night i had a dream. The whole school caught fire because of a cosmic explosion planned by Iraq and Iran. I started weeping cos i saw Renu caught between the flames. I ran as fast as my little feet could carry me and before long i was standing in front of the class. I opened the door with one powerful kick and searched for a fire extinguisher.

But i could not find one in the near by surroundings. That night before hitting bed i drank lots of water and as the water tank was full, i decided to save my Renu by extinguishing the fire using the only resource available at that time. I did not give a second thought and with in seconds, I was performing the extinguishing act. Suddenly some one hit me hard on my back and i woke up to see my angry dad, closing the refrigerator with parting words “ stop peeing in the refrigerator”

-Chronicwriter

This is the song that I wrote for Renu

video

It was the year 1985, I was 3 years old. My parents took me to a new place;My first day in school. I went inside, there were kids around. They were crying out loud.But there was a guy who was not crying. His name was Shabir. I looked to my right and saw a boy,he was crying bitterly. I looked at the door ,my parents were gone;I started to cry. {whistling} I looked to my left and there she sat;The most beautiful girl. Her eyes were like blueberry,lips were like strawberry.Yes! It was love at first sight.

Renu! Oh Renu.. You are my cutie pie.

You are my honey,chocolate,rasagulla,sonpapdi

You are my lady love {harmonica &guitar}

Shabir, Renu and I were classmates in school. I loved Renu and so did Shabir, the competition intensified.I did everything to win her heart,I always dreamt of her. Sometimes she smiled at me; sometimes she smiled at Shabir. Can someone tell me,what a girl wants! Renu! Oh Renu

We grew up together and we left the school, we finished college too. Renu is now the mother of two. Hahaha-I am laughing cos her husband's name is not Shabir. Renu! Oh Renu

- Chroniclover

64 comments:

  1. i loved the song!!!
    so rasgulla and son papri are ur fave sweets?u put them in league of honey and chocolate!!!
    man!!
    loved the tune:)
    hope Renu gets to hear it too...;)

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  2. a total entertaining post.. its got all... comedy, tragedy n a great song too :) ...

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  3. One teeny weeny thingy - Ur caricature artist replaced ur noodles hair-do :( with this dweeby hairdo!! X(

    LOL !!! The song is.... (need i say) LOL!!.. rasagula.. sonpapadi(luvd the accent here):P

    Keep em rolling!
    Kudos!!

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  4. hehehehhhehe :) Chris.. u left me all upset!!! loved the way u intro the plot

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  5. loved the post,
    loved the song and
    loved the cartoon
    n the bio too,especially urs..
    the cartoon of urs is nice too.. :)
    great work mate :)
    take care

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  6. awww.. :) u knw u were blushing while taking her name in the song :P
    ur descriptions n imaginations are like ahhh :P wat do i say :P
    btw u sing really well prason :)a very smoothly sung :)
    i hope renu gets to hear it :)
    take care!!

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  7. Renu-va vida maateengala? ;) First love is ALWAYS spesial la??? ;)

    A - for abracadabra... Shabir at L.K.G... no wonder. Renu would have been impressed by his intelligence as such a young child.

    All your bio-data... simply rotfl.

    A small correction: "cope with" is the correct form I think. "Cope up with" is the Indianised version.

    Take care :)

    Cheers!

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  8. Superb post.. Renu patha romba nalla irukum :P and bio-data, fire extinguishing method, lolz.... and song.......wowowoww.. lyrics are excellent.. esp. the chorus part :D
    Loved it chriz ji :D

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  9. i love that metaphor sonpapdi..

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  10. wats she doing now..:P:P
    go search for ur frst love :P
    hopefully wthout a villain ;)

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  11. O my god... U R amazing man !!! the sonpapdi !!! superb... great imagination.. room potu yosipigalo !!

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  12. hahahahah !! rasgulla sonpapdi !! awesome !!

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  13. lovely descriptions...and the song was gr8!!

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  14. super super..again a wonderful post .. u gave me a chance to smile at d end of d day:) thx 4 that..:)

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  15. A good one Mate.

    You started off too young :)

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  16. Just loved it!!!! The song is a real hit....

    I was waiting for a new post from you...Worth the wait. Complete entertainer. :-)

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  17. Awww man!!! This song is so cute! Love the way you say Son papdi...

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  18. Aioo am gone case...the song is playing continuously on my laptop instead of the kaminey number...

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  20. my friend chris..
    live in bliss
    days are gone
    when renu was one
    its no time for sorrow,
    there is always saro.
    thank the preacher
    u hve got a great teacher

    - i dedicate this to the chronic writer.

    i composed this in abcd major. u could also try out in physics major.

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  21. Hi Chris
    I loved the post specially the peeing on the fridge part.
    If you are mentioning 'Music' Saro as your KG teacher at Morton, did you know actress nayantara is related to her?

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  22. loved the way u sang the song..reading the lyrics it didn't read too exciting..listening to you..it was good..

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  23. *Applause* *applause*

    Awesome song, and it's stuck in my head.
    Lets call it the sonpapdi song! :D

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  24. Good enhanced repost!

    And yeah just in case you needed to discuss something, my id as you probably know is
    write.to.stupidosaur@gmail.com

    But I dont feel like typing/writing much these days, so may reply weekly/monthly/quarterly/semiannually/annually/sometimes in a lifetime

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  25. ur really talented...keep it up!

    and thanks for lifting my spirits!

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  26. Damn that was cute! Did Renu and you stop avoiding each other eventually? Rocking song, by the way! :D

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  27. heyy

    loved ur post yaar :D
    refreshingly cuteee

    and that song ...its really nice, u play nice guitar

    kep writing, keep rocking :D

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  28. woooohhhhoooo!!
    superb song

    u r seriously great in singing!
    ofcourse to make us laugh as well..

    toooo goood!
    cheers

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  29. The cartoons are super cute!!!!! :) so is ur song! :D

    Renu! Oh Renu.. You are my cutie pie.

    You are my honey,chocolate,rasagulla,sonpapdi

    Lolz!!!!!!!

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  30. 1000 periyar vandhalum ungala thirutha mudiadhu .. lol :)

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  31. HAHA funny... especially the way u tried to commit suicide...

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  32. Aiyo...kalakitingoooo i laughed till my stomach hurt when i read abt yur profile...( superman..red underwear..ha ha room pottu yosipingalo) , and yeah the song! boy, ever have a thought to tune for TR? guess yu'd do a great job for his romantic comedy songs! he he...god bles yu Bro..really enjoyed all the way down.. If at all there was a gal Renu..i know how she'd feel know...LMAO

    H a R y

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  33. I am laughin' coz her hubby's name is not Shabir.

    lol...

    U r so talented.

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  34. so cute teenage love story, you are good!

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  35. amazing song...lol!!
    renu would have been err..impressed had she to hear it ;)
    and maybe her kids would have enjoyed it better than their nursery rhymes too :D

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  36. awesome bro.... awesome....

    and the song ur singing everything was mindblowingly wonderful..... I even downloaded the flv version of ur song... :D

    and the post read was mindblowingly cute and funny...so true u r KIndergarten POTA laws :P and I kno boys are happy with lil things like..wat the hell if she is not my mate at least she is not my rival's ..lol

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  37. and yeah cartoons were supa cute too... kudos to Cherubina

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  38. You are one super 'quality' performer:)

    Loved the song. And better still, Loved the way you sang 'and his name was not Shabir'.

    Keep up Mr.Performer:)
    So many feathers in your cap!:)

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  39. ROFLMAO!! that song has to be the BESTEST video i've ever seen on ur site so far! :D :D loved every line of it...

    the honey, rasagulla, soanpapdi line made me giggle LOL

    and u whistle awesome btw! :-)

    that apart, i think u need to get over renu.. its been awhile since u've been pining over her... and besides she's married. on 2nd thot, never mind... thats what makes for interesting posts like these! :D

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  40. i had heard this story before.. but this time there were the cartoons so it was again a happy feeling.. :)

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  41. awesome...superb chriz...:D

    every1's profile was gr8..:P

    renu's superhero: barbie doll..lol...

    chriz's Hobbies : Eating candle sticks, running around the house naked!!!....lmao

    Shabbir's Strengths: I can go to the toilet alone at night time. I do not fear darkness...rofl...

    keep the fun goin dude...:D

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  42. ROFL..what an awesome post...you are be the director ,actor,producer of this movie..when is it releasing :)

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  43. You knw Shabir actually cannot spell "Antarctica"....he thinks its " ANTARTICA".

    :p

    YOu should totally get into movie makin. The bhojpuri guys are gonna love this !!!

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  44. Hey the bio data was too interesting...he he he

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  45. am so glad..renu is no more with you...lol...cartons are too good...

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  46. Wow! cute story...sorry...sorry... Cute love-story...

    :) but as always u r the most comic character... :D Peeing on the refrigator?? :D :D

    :) waiting for your next post.

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  47. lol at the attempt at suicide picture.

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  48. I Hope renu reads this :)
    Super cute post mann ...loved the song :)

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  49. heyyy thats a nice post...i havent got a chance to listen to the song yet...(m at work now) but will listen to it when i go home...and leave my comments...
    i reallllly wish Renu was for real ...she would be one lucky girl :)

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  50. AWESOME chriz..!!! And I owe you a compliment, You have an awesome voice man, and smart too! :P

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  51. Super Chriz Lovely Song i enjoyed them along with the Lyrics. real good work and i neva knew know ur good at playing Guitar nala irunthuda

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  52. that pic is just rofl i mean i am literally on the floor laughing oh my god :D, :P

    and the song was cho cho chweet, i am sad for you donno why, even when i know this tory is a lie :)

    well good luck for the better future though

    and i still gotta see you on my blog.....


    take care and keep writing..........

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  53. Hi! Chriz,
    once again,uve rocked.Hey our fire officer is on vacation,can u join us for a few days :),u'l be paid additional for ur songs tooo,coool dude,ur voice & lyrics,was real fun(and no POTA here,u r free...)

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  54. heheheh :P...
    muahhhhhh to the post...
    song is sweet...ur sweet :D:D

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  55. Committing suicide picture was brutal hardcore brave act!

    Crazy little thing called love :-)

    You have Renu love of your life just like most of us have someone special whom we'll never forget even I have it's seems kinda universal.

    Thanks Chriz \\m// \\m//

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  56. naaa naa naaa naa nnaa na na enjoyed the song !

    love you pal !

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  57. a real nut case u are Chriz....

    i loved the way u had played with accents,.. but hated the harmonica bit... no hard feelings...

    come up with more soon

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  58. i have tagged u http://hummingwords.blogspot.com/2009/08/tagged.html

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  59. Award-shaward! You have recieved a G-Rammy award, do check out my new post :-)

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  60. hahaha! u have me laughing here!!! That was really cute...the rasgulla song...man! u surely know how to play with ur words!

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  61. Wow,, this is an amazing blog.. you are really blessed with talents :)

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