January is drawing to an end and as promised I am gonna give the best post award to the post that I liked the most this month. The winner of this award is Shiv. His posts are really informative for Business management students;especially those who pursue a marketing dream.The Chronic-Award for January goes for his innovative post on Tissue-pack marketing. Click his picture to read this award winning post.
I just realised that it has been more than a year since I posted my so called poetic interludes. Inspired by the the winning post I decided to just go along with the flow and dedicate a poem for my future wife. The funnel poetry style is adapted by the author (Funnel poetry style gives a funnel structure to the poetic-flow)
Because I love you
I am standing near the gate of your life
Will you open it?
Will you open it?
I am knocking at the door of your soul
Can you hear me?
I am near the window of your mind
Can you read me?
All I want is a passage
To see you
To feel your thoughts
To know how you act
To find how you look at me
All I want is a Vision
To picturise you
Just a little peep
A small crack
A keyhole
A window
A door
The truth is I dont know you
But I want to know you
Because I love you
-Chronicwriter
applause.. nice.. but u've confused me...
ReplyDeleteGoodness that was a good funnel you drew there :) !!
ReplyDeleteclaps...
nice poetry too :) !!
damn innovative!
arumai...funnelaa thanni varum illa :P :P :P
ReplyDeletehey nice poem.. keep going. i hope u meet her soon...
ReplyDeletegreat poetry! the funnel shape is unique:) So, you are not funny everytime!(lolzz-just joking)
ReplyDeletePerfect funnel it is :) Nice poetry..
ReplyDelete*clap* *clap*
ReplyDelete:D nice nice!!
Superabu !!!! Ennama Kavithai !!!! VA effect !!!
ReplyDeletecongratulations to the winner..!!!
ReplyDeleteand the poem....cute one..!!!
you special girl will be glad for you..!!!
Hey.. Nice poetry.. And i have an award for u on my blog.. Check it out..
ReplyDeletewow!congrats shiv and hey u write really well. Loved ur poem.
ReplyDeleteBravo! Very sweet and romantic. So, now I see the poet Chriz too! Good. :)
ReplyDeleteHi mama,
ReplyDeleteThis is Agent Jer and Agent Jo
WE took a look at ur poem. WE analysed it from every angle. WE have come to a conclusion. The poem is in the shape of a pen. Good work chronicwriter mama.
love you lots
Jer & Jo
congrats shiv and chris unakkulla oru frost olinju irukkaru pola irukku
ReplyDeletenice one ... n a different style... will try it .. :)
ReplyDeleteoh so the chronicwriter is a chronic poet too :) amazing!
ReplyDeleteWowie... Congratulations to Mr. Shiv!
ReplyDeleteAh, you have funnelled your feelings for the-to-be-Missus Chronicwriter, eh... Kewl... :)
Innovative bro'... ;)
Peace.
haahaa.. congo for pioneering the Funnel Poetry :D:D
ReplyDeleteill try it too :P jus let these exams finish
ma prev days JAVA program was a funnel too :P, well actually the symmetric half of the funnel :P
that makes me wonder.. i think ill go for hourglass poetry or maybe a pepsi bottle one ..lol :D:D
ReplyDeletecongrats to shiv. :)
ReplyDeleteand hey d poem is very nice :)
aww..That's really beautiful..:)..
ReplyDeleteAwesome poem bro...loved the figurative structure too! ;)
ReplyDeleteCongrats Shiv!! :D
Chriz, Try not telling her you don't know her.Some girls might feel intimidated that way. But anyways, good luck for the gates to open !
ReplyDeleteCongrattz Shiv!
ReplyDeleteSo very generous of ya Chriz :)
I love the poem...beautiful!
Keshi.
r u ok dude??? he hee :P
ReplyDeletenice one mate.. cheers...
wow!
ReplyDeleteur future wife is so lucky :D
kewl!
nice one
Lovely structure to the verse, lovely flow and lovely lines too Chriz - simple but striking a chord - or is it 'cord'? Sheesh! - somewhere!
ReplyDeleteGood post:)
Cheers!
aawwwww! cool cool...
ReplyDeleteI didn't knew u were a poet too..
and yeah, gud luck in finding ur future wife. :P
that post really deserved the award..:D
ReplyDeletei never understood wats funnel poetry..but here I cud see what it actually is
no offence ...but guess u should stick to writing funny posts bro :) The poem's nice but ur normal posts are nicer :P
ReplyDeleteThe management post by your friend was really informative ...Good Work :)
dunno y, but i love ur funnel poem of urs rater than ur clean red undie...
ReplyDeleteu are really my valentine this 14th.. rest assured Chriz :-)
Congratulations to Shiv :)
ReplyDeleteNice poetry :) r u soo romantic? :P
@anusha
ReplyDeleteconfused you on what?
@charmed one
;) have to get beck to the nutty side
@arun
thanni varanum.. but idhula varala
@nidhi
ReplyDeletesigh***
@mithe
funny people cant have an emotional and romantic side?
@ramana
ReplyDeletethanks bro
@phoenix
bows down..
@shiv
va effect? varnam aayiram? hehe.. irukum kandippaa
@yamini
haha..:)
@riya
ReplyDeleteyes i checked it out. thanks a bunch
@ria
thanks you sista
@tara
the poet was sleeping for a year. now woke up..
@jeremy and jolena
ReplyDeletehaha... keep reading .. tomorrow blog post on jolena will come up
@karthik
robert frost ellaaam irukuraaru.. but mirugam always sleeping or blind like milton
@pratibha
yes. would like to see that style in your page soon
@pink
not a chronic-poet. funny posts are my cup anytime.. regarding poetry, wanted to try cos it has been a long time
@kartz
ReplyDeletehaha.. romance is still hovering in the virtual world only
@shimmer
let us discover more shapes.. yes. zero is a good number too ..:)
@preeti
yes shiv deserves more...
and thanks
@anly
ReplyDeletethanks gal
@sree
:) thanks from me and shiv
@sandy
i am no magician to know her now.. :)
will know her one day.. ill make her read this one that day...
@kesh
ReplyDeletethanks .. and waiting for iur post
hugs
@arv
i am not ok..
cranky as always
@amrita
lucky in what way? thanks.. btw was that sarcasm by any chance?
@srini
ReplyDeletechord or cord... dunno bro.. even me gotta search for the right word.. but anyways i got it.. :)
@swetha
not hunting .. time will come :)
@praveen
so that was funnel poetry? hehe..
and you also call me an Oxford dictionary when I do not know the basic difference?;) Or was that in jest? lol.
ReplyDeleteHave a lovely day:)
@anurag
ReplyDeleteyes the funny posts are better.. this poem was to come out of the normal one..
@rat
is it.. cool
hop on the valentine van.. we will hit the road
@swats
ReplyDeleteam i romantic? :)
@srini
ReplyDeletei wanted to use oxford cos it was hard to decode then.. :)
Congratulations Shiv !!
ReplyDeleteChriz!!! funnel n all :) hope ur future wife hasnt seen it yet:)
So,even u hv started giving away awards? nice...
ReplyDeletecongrats to shiv :)
nice senti stuffs u hv come out with ;)
Nice funnel poetry..seeing it for the 1st time. Thats very creative of you..your thought flow is too good. Hope you meet her soon. :)
ReplyDeleteYour blog is very interesting.
Keep up the good job.
Cheers!!!
nice funneling of thoughts there..!
ReplyDeleteThat was cute:-)
ReplyDeletea small tag for you :
ReplyDeletehttp://creatingnewblog.blogspot.com/2009/01/jus-ques.html
hope u wnt mind ;)
beautiful words... love is in the air...come February...
ReplyDeleteagain I faced the blog error while I was trying to access ur blog.
ReplyDelete..Nice poem...
In some of the comments, people were talking about ur "future wife", presently u dont have any right :)?
Applause!
ReplyDeletethat was really cool man!!!
ReplyDeletevery nice funnel poetry for your future wife.
ReplyDelete@vinnie
ReplyDeletenot yet? cha
@archana
yes.. but no tagging with the award stuff..
@wildchild
thanks for coming... do keep coming.. god bless
@HP
ReplyDeletehaha.. thank you
@archana
thank you :)
@pretty
thank you
@swayam
ReplyDeleteyes its the feb bug
@unknown
i am single and does that mean i am not married?
@divyaka
ReplyDeletenandri
@mayz
thanks bro
@kiran
its been a long time.. haha thanks !
dont scare ur future wife with such poems!!
ReplyDeleteand congrats to shiv!!
Cool one.........hope to read more poetry from you in the days to come!
ReplyDeleteNice one ...
ReplyDeleteWhat an attempt!!
ReplyDeleteheee. this post made me post. fanks :)
ReplyDeleteyou are a good poet chriz... you should write more poems...
ReplyDelete"all i want is a passage
to see you
to feel your thoughts"
great lines... enjoyed it.
Such a beautiful poem-i had to read it twice.
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