Jan 31, 2009

286. Funnel poetry!

January is drawing to an end and as promised I am gonna give the best post award to the post that I liked the most this month. The winner of this award is Shiv. His posts are really informative for Business management students;especially those who pursue a marketing dream.The Chronic-Award for January goes for his innovative post on Tissue-pack marketing. Click his picture to read this award winning post.

I just realised that it has been more than a year since I posted my so called poetic interludes. Inspired by the the winning post I decided to just go along with the flow and dedicate a poem for my future wife. The funnel poetry style is adapted by the author (Funnel poetry style gives a funnel structure to the poetic-flow)


Because I love you

I am standing near the gate of your life
Will you open it?
I am knocking at the door of your soul
Can you hear me?
I am near the window of your mind
Can you read me?

All I want is a passage
To see you
To feel your thoughts
To know how you act
To find how you look at me
All I want is a Vision
To picturise you
Just a little peep
A small crack
A keyhole
A window
A door

The truth is I dont know you
But I want to know you
Because I love you

-Chronicwriter

67 comments:

  1. applause.. nice.. but u've confused me...

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  2. Goodness that was a good funnel you drew there :) !!
    claps...
    nice poetry too :) !!
    damn innovative!

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  3. arumai...funnelaa thanni varum illa :P :P :P

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  4. hey nice poem.. keep going. i hope u meet her soon...

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  5. great poetry! the funnel shape is unique:) So, you are not funny everytime!(lolzz-just joking)

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  6. Perfect funnel it is :) Nice poetry..

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  7. Superabu !!!! Ennama Kavithai !!!! VA effect !!!

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  8. congratulations to the winner..!!!

    and the poem....cute one..!!!

    you special girl will be glad for you..!!!

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  9. Hey.. Nice poetry.. And i have an award for u on my blog.. Check it out..

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  10. wow!congrats shiv and hey u write really well. Loved ur poem.

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  11. Bravo! Very sweet and romantic. So, now I see the poet Chriz too! Good. :)

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  12. Hi mama,
    This is Agent Jer and Agent Jo

    WE took a look at ur poem. WE analysed it from every angle. WE have come to a conclusion. The poem is in the shape of a pen. Good work chronicwriter mama.

    love you lots
    Jer & Jo

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  13. congrats shiv and chris unakkulla oru frost olinju irukkaru pola irukku

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  14. nice one ... n a different style... will try it .. :)

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  15. oh so the chronicwriter is a chronic poet too :) amazing!

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  16. Wowie... Congratulations to Mr. Shiv!

    Ah, you have funnelled your feelings for the-to-be-Missus Chronicwriter, eh... Kewl... :)

    Innovative bro'... ;)

    Peace.

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  17. haahaa.. congo for pioneering the Funnel Poetry :D:D

    ill try it too :P jus let these exams finish

    ma prev days JAVA program was a funnel too :P, well actually the symmetric half of the funnel :P

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  18. that makes me wonder.. i think ill go for hourglass poetry or maybe a pepsi bottle one ..lol :D:D

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  19. congrats to shiv. :)

    and hey d poem is very nice :)

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  20. aww..That's really beautiful..:)..

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  21. Awesome poem bro...loved the figurative structure too! ;)
    Congrats Shiv!! :D

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  22. Chriz, Try not telling her you don't know her.Some girls might feel intimidated that way. But anyways, good luck for the gates to open !

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  23. Congrattz Shiv!

    So very generous of ya Chriz :)

    I love the poem...beautiful!

    Keshi.

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  24. r u ok dude??? he hee :P

    nice one mate.. cheers...

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  25. wow!

    ur future wife is so lucky :D

    kewl!
    nice one

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  26. Lovely structure to the verse, lovely flow and lovely lines too Chriz - simple but striking a chord - or is it 'cord'? Sheesh! - somewhere!

    Good post:)

    Cheers!

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  27. aawwwww! cool cool...
    I didn't knew u were a poet too..
    and yeah, gud luck in finding ur future wife. :P

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  28. that post really deserved the award..:D

    i never understood wats funnel poetry..but here I cud see what it actually is

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  29. no offence ...but guess u should stick to writing funny posts bro :) The poem's nice but ur normal posts are nicer :P

    The management post by your friend was really informative ...Good Work :)

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  30. dunno y, but i love ur funnel poem of urs rater than ur clean red undie...


    u are really my valentine this 14th.. rest assured Chriz :-)

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  31. Congratulations to Shiv :)

    Nice poetry :) r u soo romantic? :P

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  32. @anusha
    confused you on what?

    @charmed one
    ;) have to get beck to the nutty side

    @arun
    thanni varanum.. but idhula varala

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  33. @nidhi
    sigh***

    @mithe
    funny people cant have an emotional and romantic side?

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  34. @ramana
    thanks bro

    @phoenix
    bows down..

    @shiv
    va effect? varnam aayiram? hehe.. irukum kandippaa

    @yamini
    haha..:)

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  35. @riya
    yes i checked it out. thanks a bunch

    @ria
    thanks you sista

    @tara
    the poet was sleeping for a year. now woke up..

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  36. @jeremy and jolena
    haha... keep reading .. tomorrow blog post on jolena will come up

    @karthik
    robert frost ellaaam irukuraaru.. but mirugam always sleeping or blind like milton

    @pratibha
    yes. would like to see that style in your page soon

    @pink
    not a chronic-poet. funny posts are my cup anytime.. regarding poetry, wanted to try cos it has been a long time

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  37. @kartz
    haha.. romance is still hovering in the virtual world only

    @shimmer
    let us discover more shapes.. yes. zero is a good number too ..:)

    @preeti
    yes shiv deserves more...
    and thanks

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  38. @anly
    thanks gal

    @sree
    :) thanks from me and shiv

    @sandy
    i am no magician to know her now.. :)
    will know her one day.. ill make her read this one that day...

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  39. @kesh
    thanks .. and waiting for iur post

    hugs

    @arv
    i am not ok..
    cranky as always

    @amrita
    lucky in what way? thanks.. btw was that sarcasm by any chance?

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  40. @srini
    chord or cord... dunno bro.. even me gotta search for the right word.. but anyways i got it.. :)

    @swetha
    not hunting .. time will come :)

    @praveen
    so that was funnel poetry? hehe..

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  41. and you also call me an Oxford dictionary when I do not know the basic difference?;) Or was that in jest? lol.

    Have a lovely day:)

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  42. @anurag
    yes the funny posts are better.. this poem was to come out of the normal one..

    @rat
    is it.. cool
    hop on the valentine van.. we will hit the road

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  43. @srini
    i wanted to use oxford cos it was hard to decode then.. :)

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  44. Congratulations Shiv !!

    Chriz!!! funnel n all :) hope ur future wife hasnt seen it yet:)

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  45. So,even u hv started giving away awards? nice...
    congrats to shiv :)

    nice senti stuffs u hv come out with ;)

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  46. Nice funnel poetry..seeing it for the 1st time. Thats very creative of you..your thought flow is too good. Hope you meet her soon. :)
    Your blog is very interesting.
    Keep up the good job.
    Cheers!!!

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  47. nice funneling of thoughts there..!

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  48. a small tag for you :

    http://creatingnewblog.blogspot.com/2009/01/jus-ques.html

    hope u wnt mind ;)

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  49. beautiful words... love is in the air...come February...

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  50. again I faced the blog error while I was trying to access ur blog.
    ..Nice poem...
    In some of the comments, people were talking about ur "future wife", presently u dont have any right :)?

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  51. very nice funnel poetry for your future wife.

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  52. @vinnie
    not yet? cha

    @archana
    yes.. but no tagging with the award stuff..

    @wildchild
    thanks for coming... do keep coming.. god bless

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  53. @HP

    haha.. thank you

    @archana
    thank you :)

    @pretty
    thank you

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  54. @swayam
    yes its the feb bug

    @unknown
    i am single and does that mean i am not married?

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  55. @divyaka
    nandri

    @mayz
    thanks bro

    @kiran
    its been a long time.. haha thanks !

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  56. dont scare ur future wife with such poems!!

    and congrats to shiv!!

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  57. Cool one.........hope to read more poetry from you in the days to come!

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  58. heee. this post made me post. fanks :)

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  59. you are a good poet chriz... you should write more poems...

    "all i want is a passage
    to see you
    to feel your thoughts"

    great lines... enjoyed it.

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  60. Such a beautiful poem-i had to read it twice.

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