January is drawing to an end and as promised I am gonna give the best post award to the post that I liked the most this month. The winner of this award is Shiv. His posts are really informative for Business management students;especially those who pursue a marketing dream.The Chronic-Award for January goes for his innovative post on Tissue-pack marketing. Click his picture to read this award winning post.
I just realised that it has been more than a year since I posted my so called poetic interludes. Inspired by the the winning post I decided to just go along with the flow and dedicate a poem for my future wife. The funnel poetry style is adapted by the author (Funnel poetry style gives a funnel structure to the poetic-flow)
Because I love you
I am standing near the gate of your life
Will you open it?
Will you open it?
I am knocking at the door of your soul
Can you hear me?
I am near the window of your mind
Can you read me?
All I want is a passage
To see you
To feel your thoughts
To know how you act
To find how you look at me
All I want is a Vision
To picturise you
Just a little peep
A small crack
A keyhole
A window
A door
The truth is I dont know you
But I want to know you
Because I love you
-Chronicwriter
applause.. nice.. but u've confused me...
Goodness that was a good funnel you drew there :) !!
claps...
nice poetry too :) !!
damn innovative!
arumai...funnelaa thanni varum illa :P :P :P
hey nice poem.. keep going. i hope u meet her soon...
great poetry! the funnel shape is unique:) So, you are not funny everytime!(lolzz-just joking)
Perfect funnel it is :) Nice poetry..
*clap* *clap*
:D nice nice!!
Superabu !!!! Ennama Kavithai !!!! VA effect !!!
congratulations to the winner..!!!
and the poem....cute one..!!!
you special girl will be glad for you..!!!
Hey.. Nice poetry.. And i have an award for u on my blog.. Check it out..
wow!congrats shiv and hey u write really well. Loved ur poem.
Bravo! Very sweet and romantic. So, now I see the poet Chriz too! Good. :)
Hi mama,
This is Agent Jer and Agent Jo
WE took a look at ur poem. WE analysed it from every angle. WE have come to a conclusion. The poem is in the shape of a pen. Good work chronicwriter mama.
love you lots
Jer & Jo
congrats shiv and chris unakkulla oru frost olinju irukkaru pola irukku
nice one ... n a different style... will try it .. :)
oh so the chronicwriter is a chronic poet too :) amazing!
Wowie... Congratulations to Mr. Shiv!
Ah, you have funnelled your feelings for the-to-be-Missus Chronicwriter, eh... Kewl... :)
Innovative bro'... ;)
Peace.
haahaa.. congo for pioneering the Funnel Poetry :D:D
ill try it too :P jus let these exams finish
ma prev days JAVA program was a funnel too :P, well actually the symmetric half of the funnel :P
that makes me wonder.. i think ill go for hourglass poetry or maybe a pepsi bottle one ..lol :D:D
congrats to shiv. :)
and hey d poem is very nice :)
aww..That's really beautiful..:)..
Awesome poem bro...loved the figurative structure too! ;)
Congrats Shiv!! :D
Chriz, Try not telling her you don't know her.Some girls might feel intimidated that way. But anyways, good luck for the gates to open !
Congrattz Shiv!
So very generous of ya Chriz :)
I love the poem...beautiful!
Keshi.
r u ok dude??? he hee :P
nice one mate.. cheers...
wow!
ur future wife is so lucky :D
kewl!
nice one
Lovely structure to the verse, lovely flow and lovely lines too Chriz - simple but striking a chord - or is it 'cord'? Sheesh! - somewhere!
Good post:)
Cheers!
aawwwww! cool cool...
I didn't knew u were a poet too..
and yeah, gud luck in finding ur future wife. :P
that post really deserved the award..:D
i never understood wats funnel poetry..but here I cud see what it actually is
no offence ...but guess u should stick to writing funny posts bro :) The poem's nice but ur normal posts are nicer :P
The management post by your friend was really informative ...Good Work :)
dunno y, but i love ur funnel poem of urs rater than ur clean red undie...
u are really my valentine this 14th.. rest assured Chriz :-)
Congratulations to Shiv :)
Nice poetry :) r u soo romantic? :P
@anusha
confused you on what?
@charmed one
;) have to get beck to the nutty side
@arun
thanni varanum.. but idhula varala
@nidhi
sigh***
@mithe
funny people cant have an emotional and romantic side?
@ramana
thanks bro
@phoenix
bows down..
@shiv
va effect? varnam aayiram? hehe.. irukum kandippaa
@yamini
haha..:)
@riya
yes i checked it out. thanks a bunch
@ria
thanks you sista
@tara
the poet was sleeping for a year. now woke up..
@jeremy and jolena
haha... keep reading .. tomorrow blog post on jolena will come up
@karthik
robert frost ellaaam irukuraaru.. but mirugam always sleeping or blind like milton
@pratibha
yes. would like to see that style in your page soon
@pink
not a chronic-poet. funny posts are my cup anytime.. regarding poetry, wanted to try cos it has been a long time
@kartz
haha.. romance is still hovering in the virtual world only
@shimmer
let us discover more shapes.. yes. zero is a good number too ..:)
@preeti
yes shiv deserves more...
and thanks
@anly
thanks gal
@sree
:) thanks from me and shiv
@sandy
i am no magician to know her now.. :)
will know her one day.. ill make her read this one that day...
@kesh
thanks .. and waiting for iur post
hugs
@arv
i am not ok..
cranky as always
@amrita
lucky in what way? thanks.. btw was that sarcasm by any chance?
@srini
chord or cord... dunno bro.. even me gotta search for the right word.. but anyways i got it.. :)
@swetha
not hunting .. time will come :)
@praveen
so that was funnel poetry? hehe..
and you also call me an Oxford dictionary when I do not know the basic difference?;) Or was that in jest? lol.
Have a lovely day:)
@anurag
yes the funny posts are better.. this poem was to come out of the normal one..
@rat
is it.. cool
hop on the valentine van.. we will hit the road
@swats
am i romantic? :)
@srini
i wanted to use oxford cos it was hard to decode then.. :)
Congratulations Shiv !!
Chriz!!! funnel n all :) hope ur future wife hasnt seen it yet:)
So,even u hv started giving away awards? nice...
congrats to shiv :)
nice senti stuffs u hv come out with ;)
Nice funnel poetry..seeing it for the 1st time. Thats very creative of you..your thought flow is too good. Hope you meet her soon. :)
Your blog is very interesting.
Keep up the good job.
Cheers!!!
nice funneling of thoughts there..!
That was cute:-)
a small tag for you :
http://creatingnewblog.blogspot.com/2009/01/jus-ques.html
hope u wnt mind ;)
beautiful words... love is in the air...come February...
again I faced the blog error while I was trying to access ur blog.
..Nice poem...
In some of the comments, people were talking about ur "future wife", presently u dont have any right :)?
Applause!
that was really cool man!!!
very nice funnel poetry for your future wife.
@vinnie
not yet? cha
@archana
yes.. but no tagging with the award stuff..
@wildchild
thanks for coming... do keep coming.. god bless
@HP
haha.. thank you
@archana
thank you :)
@pretty
thank you
@swayam
yes its the feb bug
@unknown
i am single and does that mean i am not married?
@divyaka
nandri
@mayz
thanks bro
@kiran
its been a long time.. haha thanks !
dont scare ur future wife with such poems!!
and congrats to shiv!!
Cool one.........hope to read more poetry from you in the days to come!
Nice one ...
What an attempt!!
heee. this post made me post. fanks :)
you are a good poet chriz... you should write more poems...
"all i want is a passage
to see you
to feel your thoughts"
great lines... enjoyed it.
Such a beautiful poem-i had to read it twice.