Mar 15, 2008

127. Complexity of life

I was chatting with a new found blog-mate this morning and I was discussing about poetry. He writes amazing poetry. His name is Naveen. We were discussing about the events that lead us to write poetry and finally when the chat ended, I badly wanted to write one.

The following lines might depict the emotional wave that is emanated from my mind. Readers can interpret these lines in their own ways. Please give your interpretations on the following lines.

Complexity of Life


I'm so confused, wanna run, wanna hide
I'm scared to take, filled with so much pride

Cant say in words, even hard to show
Wanna drift away, but find it hard to let go

Love or lust, I dont even know
That urge and temptation to just go with the flow

Hard to show feelings, emotion and all
Not sure to open up,cautious I might fall


Tired of all the drama, pain and being abused
Tired of suffering and not knowing whos being used

So far so good, in fear that it might go wrong
I dont actually know how it lasted this long

I just hope this feeling will lead to something more
Something right and true, something to live for.
-Chronicwriter

14 comments:

  1. This poem is crazy cool .. so sensuous so moving.. it just gets to you even if you have no idea what its about~~~
    Tat was awesome...
    I don think tis is ur first poem..
    and am honored tat i made u write one!
    Thanx dude! :-)

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  2. @naveen
    machi.. not my first ofcourse.. if i had not got that link from you this mornng, this post wud not have come.. welkum machoo

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  3. It's a good poem-and to be honest, I usually don't like reading poetry much.

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  4. good job...simple words... they simply tell the emotions behind a deeply disturbed mind.
    For me, it talks about a person standing in the crossroads of her life... her past influencing her future, not able to let go and not able to hold on..

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  5. @silver..
    you are here after 6 months.. great..

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  6. @destiny
    you are almost evry close to the emotions with wich i drafted this post

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  7. if dats ur first attempt thn i must say...great job!!

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  8. @gunj
    not my first attempt. thank you anyways...:-)

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  9. Hard to show feelings, emotion and all
    Not sure to open up,cautious I might fall

    tats so me... n ur nephew is very cute!!!

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  10. hahaha
    @bubbles

    which foto?
    the black and white snap? thats me...
    the colour pix is my nephew.. and yeah! he is cute

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  11. super interpretations. nothing more to add! =)

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  12. perfect rhyming and soulful lines :)

    Let me also try...

    FOR FIRST LOVE :) CHEERS Chriz!

    let me count to ten
    Go hide inside the pen.
    I tried to find you but then
    you hid so nicely, "I WON".

    What is it you are holding?
    So tight that it is folding.
    What is it you are saving?
    waiting for me to come braving?

    Don't look at me that way
    my heart melts at your sway.
    I melt and yearn for a bite
    Oh! the green apple you hold so tight.

    Could spot you in the crowd,
    watching me fall hands bowed,
    my eyes glued at you
    not at the road below you.

    Is it wrong to cry?
    Is it wrong to hide?
    The ground below me poked
    When my thread to sanity broke.

    YOU and ME on a bright sunny day
    trees and breeze waved with gay
    YOU and ME and the beautiful meadow
    still brings a smile wide and mellow.

    Let me tell you how I feel
    my heart is beating like a fool
    Allow me get you the brightest gem
    wrap it a packet for thee my lovely fem.

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