Yeah I wrote this for You
Just sit down and read it.
And nobody told me that it would hurt this much
Why did you run into my life
With that cheap smile and those perfect eyes
Our meaningless realtionship
Your Cries and our fights
Your touch and our kiss
You yelled out I love you
Why can't you see that
Those words meant nothing
You meant nothing to me
But why does it hurt so bad
I hate thinking of you
It bothers me so much
On those nights like this
When you are the only one on my mind
It bothers me so much that I still write for you
Even yearn for you
I threw you away like you where yesterday's news
But nobody told me that it would hurt like this
-Chronicwriter
Hey nice poem why so sad? Have you broken up with someone "Special"? Hope not.
ReplyDeleteIts a good poem. it has indeed touched one soul but on the Right side :wink: :wink:. i am still straight!!
Cheap smile and a meaningless relationship ??? really? Then you wouldn't necessarily need to bother !! Hey, nice work by the ways !!
ReplyDelete@ santosh
ReplyDeletehehe..i broke with pamela anderson... i am writing it with a third person view.. am still single and my mind is completely in control.. its just the weekend lull
@sandy
ReplyDeletei never bothered.. the worried soul in the poem is the one who should bother.. and thank you for the compliment
Good One!!
ReplyDeleteBut tell me, would cheap smile and perfect eyes make a combination? Would it go hand it hand?
Eye generally conveys what's on the lip.Ain't it?
@may
ReplyDeleteyes.. thats the point conveyed there.. deceiving smile... post and pre anguish
cheap smile..... ???
ReplyDeleteanyway ..... nice 1
wow.. super.. :| i can totally relate to that btw.. :|
ReplyDelete*grabs the chocolate bar again* =(
hi,
ReplyDeletea very nice n painful poem. but chriz u always say my frnd gaya3 , "not to pour out ur emotions- it is a public formum" ; wat so happened tat u had to write this one?
but i was able to relate to it completely.
ritu
go have a beer bro
ReplyDeletehey Chriz ty for stopping by my blog.
ReplyDeleteSad but beautiful poem...hope its not real though. TC!
Keshi.
@anusha
ReplyDeleteyes cheap smile... author and the character shud not be misinterpreted as one..
@gaya3...
ReplyDeletechocolate bar? what abt exercises machaan?
@ ritu
ReplyDeleteyes .. never pour out your emotions while writing.. hehe.. the person mentioned here is not me..
@sajeeve
ReplyDeletebeer doesnt taste good. might go for some shots though
@keshy
ReplyDeleteit is real in many a souls' lives
Awesome...It was indeed very touching...It's hard to believe that you wrote it with a thrid person's perspective....I thought you had to feel such things to write it....awesome work :).
ReplyDelete@priti
ReplyDeleteIf we can vibrate between different emotional wavelengths,w e can surely write one without any experience.. thank ya for the comment. do come
Liked everything but the 'cheap smile'! :( I've got a thing for smiles, u know. :(
ReplyDeleteTears chriz! Nothing else. And I do not care I am a man!
ReplyDeletehello Chronic Writer, its really a nice one.... And when i read the line "Cheap smile and perfect eyes"..... i kind of figured wat type of person you are..... so lovely and a very perfect combination of words is used. The Interpretation that i used here was" Cheap smile -- which was very instant and was always there you dont need to pay to see that....."
ReplyDeleteSurely this someone should be worth, as its pains when you miss someone..
So lovely yar.... and the pic talks more to your Poetry.....its simply great........ my 3rd post.....
Good one chriz...word play is really good...
ReplyDeletei can so relate to this rite now... like an old news ignored but he lingers everywhere wanted unwanted
ReplyDeletereally really good! i totally get it.
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