Should I try my fingers in poetry?
I looked at my life,
With all the broken promises,
The shattered dreams,
I closed my eyes,
And kept walking to no direction,
In my direction,
There were many like me,
Many broken hearts,
Tears shed,
Followed by unbroken silence,
I had to be strong,
A time has come,
A light at the end of the tunnel,
An awakening voice from dreamland of weakness,
Determination to fight for my life,
And I believe,
I could be all I want to be,
If only I tried.
-Chronicwriter
Wow!!!
ReplyDeleteare you getting married?
ReplyDeleteif this is a serious poem than nice poem else when is the engagement?
this poem tell the story of each one of us!!
@flowerr
ReplyDeleteme making a bow... name please. it would be better to address you with your name rather than using your blog name
@santosh
ReplyDeletenot in the near future... going through the hardest phase in life.. mid twenties are irritating..
That was nice Chriz .. & I yup mid twenties are irritating..!!
ReplyDeletegrowing is hard
ReplyDeletegood one!
@gomz
ReplyDeletevery true.. every one else other than you want to see you married...
@ mazhalai
it was not hard at all.. thats why i never grew.. hehe.. thank you for visiting my blog..
@chriz - You could call me 'May'.That's me!
ReplyDelete"I looked at my life,
ReplyDeleteWith all the broken promises,
The shattered dreams,
I closed my eyes,
And kept walking to no direction," - simple but powerful and beautiful Chriz! Apt for my life right now and someday I will find the strength to walk on too!