Oct 4, 2007

63. Faded life

Should I try my fingers in poetry?



I looked at my life,
With all the broken promises,
The shattered dreams,
I closed my eyes,
And kept walking to no direction,
In my direction,
There were many like me,
Many broken hearts,
Tears shed,
Followed by unbroken silence,
I had to be strong,
A time has come,
A light at the end of the tunnel,
An awakening voice from dreamland of weakness,
Determination to fight for my life,
And I believe,
I could be all I want to be,
If only I tried.

-Chronicwriter

9 comments:

  1. are you getting married?

    if this is a serious poem than nice poem else when is the engagement?
    this poem tell the story of each one of us!!

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  2. @flowerr

    me making a bow... name please. it would be better to address you with your name rather than using your blog name

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  3. @santosh

    not in the near future... going through the hardest phase in life.. mid twenties are irritating..

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  4. That was nice Chriz .. & I yup mid twenties are irritating..!!

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  5. @gomz

    very true.. every one else other than you want to see you married...

    @ mazhalai

    it was not hard at all.. thats why i never grew.. hehe.. thank you for visiting my blog..

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  6. @chriz - You could call me 'May'.That's me!

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  7. "I looked at my life,
    With all the broken promises,
    The shattered dreams,
    I closed my eyes,
    And kept walking to no direction," - simple but powerful and beautiful Chriz! Apt for my life right now and someday I will find the strength to walk on too!

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